Nov 14, 2011

Lé Chocolat

By QuratulAin Rashid

Q: Compare a person to an item of food. (150 words)

Like a piece of cake, she sits at the edge of a counter of a bar, waiting to be devoured.

Her hair is long and curly, like the ruffles of dark chocolate on a moist and melt-in-your-mouth, slender slice of cake. With her dark and delicate fingers, she slowly mixes her drink. Her gold bracelet gleams like gems of hazelnut praline on a dark surface.

Shes crosses her silky smooth legs and pulls down her little black dress. He looks at her from the corner of his eyes. There is a roughness about her, a bitterness.

"Can I help you?" she asks him.

There is a sweetness in her voice, a layer of light chocolate cake as the base for a decent layer of rich chocolate mousse.

He looks into her eyes, and smiles.

11 comments:

Rahima said...

I love this, Anny! :D

AnnyR said...

:D Thanks, Rahima!

Dania said...

Delicious! ;)

Aiman Fajr said...

i feel hungry now,so well described! :)

Zoha Jabbar said...

Yum!

Asma Afzal said...

Now I want cake. A moist melt in your mouth cake with ruffles of dark chocolate.

Naveen Qazi said...

Wow. :')

Farwa Haider said...

I just want chocolate! =)~ This is really good!

Reja Younis said...

I never knew a person could be compared to chocolate so well! Awesome.

Aimah said...

Wow. This is very well-written.

Maha asif said...

Very well-written. i couldn't even imagine comparing a person to a chocolate.. :)

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