Qs. Create a setting that conveys a certain mood and atmosphere (300-400 words)
     By Alisha Sethi
The  visitors of the dilapidated building were greeted with blaring  Bollywood music and the odour of cheap perfume.The true rundown  condition of '24/7 Inn' came in full view when the moon felt courteous  enough to cast it under its spotlight. Upon entering the site little  quivers of excitement,like needles,would run down the back and under the  soles of all those in search of a quick hour or night of pleasure.One  could choose,like out of a menu,where you consider not only the  description of the dish but also how tight it stretches your wallet.
On a  busy night,the occupancy rate would go as high as ninety five percent.  Physically they were were all more or less the same but some,' the  favourites',were classified to be more skillful,more crafty,more  appealing. Huge cleavage,blood red lipstick and powder clad faces were  not enough to grant you an upper hand these days.
The  musty corridors were dimly lit with white tubelights and one of the  corners of the worn out carpet was damp,being subject to the leaking  roof. The pungent smell of the hallway,seared all those who walked  through it. Trails of muddy footsteps ran along the carpet,each ending  at a different room. Ah,the rooms. Each room displayed the tastes of  their owners. Each room had its unique elements,the elements their  respective owners thought would seduce the hungry beasts into coming  back for more.Aromatic rose water and incense were found in some and  often aided in putting their paid lovers in slightly more easy to please  moods. The men particularly appreciated the sound of clinking anklets  and the show that their entertainers put before them.
These  uncouth occupants,which the decrepit building housed,would begin each  day pondering about how lucrative their bodies would serve to be that  particular day. They were almost always right with the figures,the  figures which determined their life. Beneath all the nylon and flashy  artificial jewellery lay souls as vain as peacocks. Each thought  themselves to be better than others.
Slithering  over heaving,eager bodies was the reality of their existence. None of  them grew up with this as their childhood dream but life wasnt fair,they  knew. Out of every Tom,Dick and Harry they knew about the ugly twists  of fate better than anyone else.

5 comments:
wow very well written!
the way you described it,incredible!
Thaaankyouu! :D
It was very well written and I could almost see all of this. The end was very sad, but Kudos to you for you did this story and this involved getting to know exactly how both the men and women feel about this.I won't be able to do such a piece.Brilliant.
Thanks Naima :D
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