By QuratulAin Rashid
Q: Compare a person to an item of food. (150 words)
Like a piece of cake, she sits at the edge of a counter of a bar, waiting to be devoured.
Her hair is long and curly, like the ruffles of dark chocolate on a moist and melt-in-your-mouth, slender slice of cake. With her dark and delicate fingers, she slowly mixes her drink. Her gold bracelet gleams like gems of hazelnut praline on a dark surface.
Shes crosses her silky smooth legs and pulls down her little black dress. He looks at her from the corner of his eyes. There is a roughness about her, a bitterness.
"Can I help you?" she asks him.
There is a sweetness in her voice, a layer of light chocolate cake as the base for a decent layer of rich chocolate mousse.
He looks into her eyes, and smiles.
Like a piece of cake, she sits at the edge of a counter of a bar, waiting to be devoured.
Her hair is long and curly, like the ruffles of dark chocolate on a moist and melt-in-your-mouth, slender slice of cake. With her dark and delicate fingers, she slowly mixes her drink. Her gold bracelet gleams like gems of hazelnut praline on a dark surface.
Shes crosses her silky smooth legs and pulls down her little black dress. He looks at her from the corner of his eyes. There is a roughness about her, a bitterness.
"Can I help you?" she asks him.
There is a sweetness in her voice, a layer of light chocolate cake as the base for a decent layer of rich chocolate mousse.
He looks into her eyes, and smiles.
11 comments:
I love this, Anny! :D
:D Thanks, Rahima!
Delicious! ;)
i feel hungry now,so well described! :)
Yum!
Now I want cake. A moist melt in your mouth cake with ruffles of dark chocolate.
Wow. :')
I just want chocolate! =)~ This is really good!
I never knew a person could be compared to chocolate so well! Awesome.
Wow. This is very well-written.
Very well-written. i couldn't even imagine comparing a person to a chocolate.. :)
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