She was seventeen when she first entered his classroom. He was thirty-two. It was wrong, yes; but oh, how the sunlight framed her. They were spellbound. He was fired, she was disowned, but it didn't matter. They wed on her eighteenth birthday, and how the sunlight framed their intertwined forms.
Something tastes peculiar in my mouth. Grime? Soil, maybe? I need some water..
As i head down the stairs, my attention is diverted by the reflections in the mirror at the landing.
Everythings reflected. Except for me..
"Bilal!" I cry out to my husband as he walks straight through me...
Ashes To Ashes
By Farwa Haider
Dust and grime covered every inch of the house's interior.The floor-boards creaked. The rats scurried by.
Were they the only inhabitants? That is what Cassie wanted to know.
Nothing unusual was sensed.
Three hours later, Cassie muttered "No ghosts here".
A voice whispered "Don't be too sure".
21 comments:
This is brilliantly written/
Though I wonder why people choose to write about a young girl and an old guy. Why can't it be the other way around? :P
Thanks :D
Hahaha we shall write one about that together :P And then we'll ask the moderator to create a separate category for "collaborations" ;)
This is so well written!
love the last line;
"how the sunlight framed their intertwined forms."
Brilliant indeed!
Haha. Now that's what I call a great idea, Zoha. We do make a good team :P
Zohhaaaa I really like this O.O
I love the simplicity of the second one.
Thank you Fatin :)
OMG Junaina, I love yours!
I lovee the first one
Junaina yours is brilliant! :)
I loved Zoha and Junaina's. So well-written. :)
junainaa wow.. great mini saga ..loved it... :)
I love both!!! The ideas were genius!! Especially yours, Junaina.
Zoha I loved the gist of your story.
Thank you so much. :) Truly flattered.
Thanks guys <3
I love Junaina and Zoha's minis! Really good.
Thank You! :)
Thanks Sana!
All of them are great and Farwa yours was really interesting!
Thanks Dania =)
Wow, Farwa. It was brilliant!
Jay Jay! Amazing. Truly amazing! loved it and the first one, zoha's. Too sexy! :P
munaim
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